not bad
yo this was pretty good...ur lyrics r there ur emotion is there...ur flow seems to be sorta on and off..but nothin too bad that u cant fix the next track u drop...this beat is pretty tight...only thing i really have any possible bad feed for would be the mixing...the beat is so high that it seems u pumped the vocals sky high to match it..so certain points i can hear ur vocals max out n it sounds sorta distorted...id reccomend next time..lower the beat..to match the vocals...cuz u can always just put the beat up...if u feel its too low....but again...good job on this man...came out nice